not poetry week
tantalizing. absolutely finger lickin good. i have no idea who you are and its burning me up inside. unless its highly unlikely jane. but then which jane? but one of the comment reminded me of a poem i read and then when looking for it realized it wasnt that one it was in fact this one that had come back to me. no more after this one i promise, the abstract is becoming far to....
Streaks of green and yellow iridescence,
Silver shiftings,
Rings veering out of rings,
Silver -- gold --
Grey-green opaqueness sliding down,
With sharp white bubbles
Shooting and dancing,
Flinging quickly outward.
Nosing the bubbles,
Swallowing them,
Fish.
rx(not part of the poem)
Streaks of green and yellow iridescence,
Silver shiftings,
Rings veering out of rings,
Silver -- gold --
Grey-green opaqueness sliding down,
With sharp white bubbles
Shooting and dancing,
Flinging quickly outward.
Nosing the bubbles,
Swallowing them,
Fish.
rx(not part of the poem)
posted by rob at 9:22 pm
5 Comments:
sometimes it takes time to find the right word ...
lostintranslation )
ps was that Alans suggestion? uh teachers
why so green ...
c'est ton résumé? to what you are in ... ooooh
... or one should go fishing and eat you all alife
... or one ... by moonlight ... impossible dream
... or just nice picture )
siren from the outer islands
why so green ...
c'est ton résumé? to what you are in ... ooooh
... or one should go fishing and eat you all alife
... or one ... by moonlight ... impossible dream
... or just nice picture )
siren from the outer islands
rob can you rub out that duplex comment ) it was not my intention to say it again & again
blbl
anticipateing a teacher comment
... yes ... i want to eat you & eat you & eat you & eat you ... ))
jane aware
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